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TO ALL WHO SEE
Contributed by
freda_burrel
on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 05:10:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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in a realm,
of forbidden love.
a feeling so deep,
in the midst of.
what can i say,
to all who see.
a loving and gentle ,
side of me.
a love beyond,
compared so true.
in love with a man,
and he is you.
what can i say,
to a love so free.
this one is for,
to all who see
Copyright ©
freda_burrel
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2004-05-08 17:10:34]
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Re: TO ALL WHO SEE
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by Kirby on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 08:51:07 PM AEST
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| You have a very good way with words and the way you write is great. Short and to the point! I love ur poetry. Love:::Kirby |
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Re: TO ALL WHO SEE
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by PumpkinPie on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 12:05:38 PM AEST
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Forbidden love is so hard to accept and I know the feeling of it,been there so many times before,waiting for the days to finally be with him,only living in my dreams...But anyways,you have crafted a beautiful poem and I liked your flow of words,rhythm and topic.Keep posting,
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