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Her Looks
Contributed by
xxapples
on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 04:31:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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As she stared into the mirror
She was looking at her face
Then she saw a tear
Her friends told her she looked fine
She hated how she looked
She thought they were just trying to be kind
She was always feeling left out
Everyone she knew was pretty
All she would do was pout
It wasn't just that problem
There were many other things
She just wanted to solve them
She let her feelings bottle up
Until she couldn't stand it anymore
She let her life slip away and drank her last cup
So now she doesn't care about how she looks
She no longer has to worry
Because she no longer is on earth
Copyright ©
xxapples
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2004-05-08 16:31:51]
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Re: Her Looks
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by williamdye on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 04:40:14 PM AEST
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| You are very pretty within regardless what society tells you on the outside. Please visit my site, turn the speakers on, lights off and enjoy. |
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Re: Her Looks
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by blossomingcherry5353 on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 03:36:42 PM AEST
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I know how you feel, because my friends say the exact same things to me and i just don't see it in me. I believe that if you are beautiful inside then you must be outside as well.
If you need someone to talk to just write to me, I'm not busy at all so i'll answer you back.
P.s Don't be afraid to be you!
shannon
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