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iminent assault
Contributed by
ebonystiletto
on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 04:06:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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out of the darkness
the ship's sails fill with sweet air
and glide past the shore
Copyright ©
ebonystiletto
... [
2004-05-08 16:06:00]
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Re: iminent assault
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by poetrygodslove on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 04:13:10 PM AEST
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| Short and sweet says alot more then what a long poem could say.. and I loved the picture that came to my mind. good write. sandy |
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Re: iminent assault
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by Archie on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 04:19:27 PM AEST
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| Nice poem, can you help me understand how the title fits the poem; I'm a little confused. |
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Re: iminent assault
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by Zaf_Stud on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 04:31:15 PM AEST
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| Though it's brief, it's full of belief with a hint of grief. Well done Chief..
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Re: iminent assault
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 04:56:02 PM AEST
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Very good Haiku.... Great image captured...
Looking forward to reading more....
Jenni |
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Re: iminent assault
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 11:34:25 PM AEST
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| beautiful. |
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