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If I Were
Contributed by
parkman
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Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 01:15:59 PM in AEST
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If I were a hero, what would I be
A knight in shining armour, to come and rescue thee
Slay the dragon and slay the beast
Free the land, to say the least
If I were a hero, what would I be
A masked crusader, to set poor people free
Give them a life, not poverty ridden
Then they would think, they were in heaven
If I were a hero, what would I be
A wonder man, to make evil flee
To weed it all out, make the world clean
Make it all happy, not vile and obscene
But I'm not a hero, just a bloke with a pen
I can't change anything, not now or then
Still I will scribble, the way that I do
And maybe one day, have some influence too
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parkman
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2004-05-08 13:15:59]
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Re: If I Were
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 02:26:38 PM AEST
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We all have an influence on those around us whether directly or indirectly. I can assure you that you have touched someone in life and many more before you leave this earth. Many time a simple smile, nod, or cheery word can change a persons day. That is as great as heroic deeds performed.
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Re: If I Were
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 05:56:19 PM AEST
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But you already ARE a hero... even if you don't realise it. And your words do influence others... Good write
Jenni |
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Re: If I Were
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by starlight4215 on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 10:19:46 AM AEST
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| Words can and do have a great influence on people. No doubt your writings have made some kind of impact on many peoples lives. You are a top class writer, with a great ability to write about everyday occurances. Keep up the good work. ~ Star x |
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