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THe WRiTiNG oN THe WaLLS
Contributed by
xslashxprettyxskinx
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Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 12:16:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Standing, staring into infinite darkness
Waiting, shaking from the room so cold
Nothing's coming and still the earths quaking
Contemplate a suicide of a story gone untold.
Lightening, striking across the ceiling
Piercing, squinting at the electric wonder
As it traces a scenery through the room
Then ends in a weak noiseless crash of thunder.
Around the walls in slow circles
Uncovering the words from my heart
A poem, written on the walls, now I'm reading
Giving me goosebumps; causing my pulse to jump start.
The hidden words of an ancient poet
In my mind, his soul unfolds
A descriptive dance of words and light
Weaving a tale of a future life holds.
And in this dream state
My mind unlocks all closed emotional doors
Something inside me shifts and settles
On this wonderful, magical psyche tour.
Dreams make life more understandable
The writing on the wall tells my story
Nightmares make life unusually unliveable
From start to bitter finish, never ending glory.
Copyright ©
xslashxprettyxskinx
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Re: THe WRiTiNG oN THe WaLLS
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by OMEGA_ on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 12:21:58 PM AEST
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Wow that was a mazing Lindsy
i really enjoying it
really well done... |
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Re: THe WRiTiNG oN THe WaLLS
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by Archie on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 12:39:05 PM AEST
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| That was an awesome poem, and you were right about the nighmare part too; I usually have troulble going bact to sleep after a nightmare. |
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Re: THe WRiTiNG oN THe WaLLS
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 12:41:50 PM AEST
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| Sounds to me like there is a dark spot within your soul which lingers to be released, may be words from an ode which past, but has a message for you to release to this world, dreams are funny sometimes, hope you find an answer to this one, thanks for sharing it, a great write indeed, take care Val |
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by Princesaazul16 on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 12:52:58 PM AEST
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| Woah, I really liked that. I hope you find some meaning to it. That's really deep, I love it! Keep up the good work! ~Stace~ |
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Re: THe WRiTiNG oN THe WaLLS
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by SuperAsh16 on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 01:02:16 PM AEST
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| excellent. straight from the heart. loved it. good write. ::claps:: |
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Re: THe WRiTiNG oN THe WaLLS
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 01:14:50 PM AEST
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Maybe your looking to deeply? the dream may have been telling you to write this poem! as, it is, an outstanding piece of work.
wildejohnny. |
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by deathdrop on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 01:35:37 PM AEST
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| this is awesome!! i feel where you're comming from. kepp your chin up. its something i have to do from now on... back to the poem. love the way you've put it! |
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Re: THe WRiTiNG oN THe WaLLS
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 02:19:43 PM AEST
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Seems to me your dream is showing you both sides of your life and placing it in your view like that is telling you it is time to make some changes in life. Dreams generally are our id bring to the front what our subconscious already knows but we don't want to deal with yet.
Rita |
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Re: THe WRiTiNG oN THe WaLLS
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 02:52:10 PM AEST
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I've been waiting FOREVER for this poem, as that particular dream has always fascinated me. And that amazing dream is drawn up expertly.
Vivid, colorful, haunting and gives the reader an accurate account of the story...Thank you for sharing this sterling poem, it is indeed exceptional.
Reaved in zephyr,
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by lostinmyself on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 02:54:07 PM AEST
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wow!!! the imagery i was getting from this was amazing. a brilliant write.
*hugs* phil xxx |
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Re: THe WRiTiNG oN THe WaLLS
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by blackmarker on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 12:37:33 AM AEST
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| Amazing.. Can I have your dreams? lol |
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Re: THe WRiTiNG oN THe WaLLS
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by MilitaryPrince on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 06:39:32 AM AEST
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| An amazing write filled to the brim with vivid imagery!! |
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