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You don't feel for me. . .
Contributed by
Piper
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Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 12:07:58 PM in AEST
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I know that you don't feel for me
The way I feel for you.
We're good friends, I value that,
There's nothing you need do.
But as a friend I need to tell you
What is in my heart.
An unsaid truth is like a wall,
Keeping us apart.
My love for you will go nowhere,
Will just remain with me.
I'll hold it in my quiet arms
And feel it constantly.
Copyright ©
Piper
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2004-05-08 12:07:58]
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Re: You don't feel for me. . .
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by OMEGA_ on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 12:13:53 PM AEST
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you must show it the one who you wrote it for
well done |
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Re: You don't feel for me. . .
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by Princesaazul16 on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 01:00:23 PM AEST
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| I can understand how you feel. I went through something like this, and it is very confusing to one's heart. But I hope that all goes well, and things get better for you! ~Stace~ |
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Re: You don't feel for me. . .
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by reprobate on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 08:03:17 AM AEST
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'an unsaid truth is like a wall'. how sad and how true. reality really bites. good job.
thanks for sharing
(and you should show this...) |
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Re: You don't feel for me. . .
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by evilfairy on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 07:49:56 PM AEST
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| great poem. i agree with everyone else.....have you shown it to the person yet? |
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Re: You don't feel for me. . .
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 08:46:36 PM AEST
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| Take a chance and maybe those walls will melt and reveal a real love....Well written. |
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