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Too Many Girls
Contributed by
reilt
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Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 09:01:57 AM in AEST
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One too many girls in here,
All tangled in her hair...
Go wash them out,
Count them down.
Cleansed of
Unwanted versions
That dirty up
The scene.
Get them out
Any which way.
Few too little of the desired.
Leave the back door open,
Guide them to that exit
And give her a chance without.
Girls on all sides
And one woman wanting
For the right.
Copyright ©
reilt
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2004-05-08 09:01:57]
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Re: Too Many Girls
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by Randibee85 on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 09:15:34 AM AEST
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| This is about a girl with a lot of different sides to her personality? I like the way you wrote this, I just... I guess I'm an idiot or something. :) |
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Re: Too Many Girls
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by OMEGA_ on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 12:31:05 PM AEST
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good write
well done |
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Re: Too Many Girls
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by emystar on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 07:16:49 PM AEST
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Good work.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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