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Torn between two
Contributed by
silent
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Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 03:49:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I remember your smile, a tender touch
It's been so long, i miss it so much
When we first met and my eyes found yours
Blue pools of tears, behind unopened doors
When my hand took yours i felt numbness leave
Memories locked away, finally i could breath
So much suffering have we both endured
I thought by now we would both be cured
We love each other
But one desires more
Desiring the despair as a child he saw
I found someone who understood my pain
She and i were quite the same
I fell in love again, while still with another
This tore me apart, for they both did smother
The life out of me
She was the key to my pain; i was free from it all
But the other was my life, without her i would be dead
I remember her reaching out to me, tears in her eyes
"just take my hand and it will all be over" she said
I looked at her and she knew
Giving her a hug goodbye was the hardest thing i have ever had to do
Well i guess it's just life huh, oh what fun
She haunts my memories, every tear i shed alone
A part of me she took, i will never be complete
One like her is a chance in a million meet
I had my chance but couldn't take it
So that's how i have to live, this life alone
Not even a photo i have, just a memory
They say it lasts a lifetime
But for me that's what i hate the most
I thank you for what we once shared
We will both die alone
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silent
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2004-05-08 03:49:52]
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Re: Torn between two
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by mountainhigh on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 04:04:56 AM AEST
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Over and over we retake those paths, what life gives is sometimes what we have, sometimes lost and so alone, but we will never die alone. We retake those paths.
Thank you for triggering this memory, we have walked that path. |
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Re: Torn between two
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by Chrissylee on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 05:04:10 AM AEST
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time and time again we take the wrong paths, i have the same problem i had two and had to choose and i chose the wrong one now i am trying to fix it but its hard very hard
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Re: Torn between two
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by arden on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 07:08:17 AM AEST
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never has a poem brought me close to tears, this just makes me want to cry. so much saddness and pain.
im speechless.... words cant express how good this poem is.
well done my friend.
Arden |
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Re: Torn between two
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 07:50:10 AM AEST
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packed full of emotion,a beautiful poem in it's entirety.
wildejohnny. |
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Re: Torn between two
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by lostinmyself on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 08:29:17 AM AEST
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this is beautiful, it brought tears to my eyes. the emotion shines in this poem. a great write. i hope you find your way soon my friend.
*hugs* phil xxx |
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Re: Torn between two
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by reilt on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 08:54:45 AM AEST
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| such an emotional write such a beautiful poem |
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Re: Torn between two
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by Princesaazul16 on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 01:34:15 PM AEST
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| I don't have much to say because no matter what I would try to say It would not be enough, so with that, I think you did a very well job at this poem. I loved it. It touched my heart in so many ways. Keep up the good work! ~Stace~ |
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Re: Torn between two
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 11:50:01 PM AEST
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ohhhh so sad!! beautiful but sooo sad!! my heart goes out to you, this poem is so moving... hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Torn between two
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by Hurretje on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 04:38:59 AM AEST
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A hard choice..both ways are thorny and sweet nectar...
Hur |
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Re: Torn between two
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 01:15:19 AM AEST
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I can't imagine having to make a choice such as this one........Would tear my heart from my chest! This poem was so remorseful also. How do you ever get over something this deep and meaningful?
Beautiful written poem.......with so much meaning, and to end it all alone.
I'm so sorry
love
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Re: Torn between two
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by Avarice_Riot on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 05:55:18 AM AEST
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| I've never been in a situation like this but I can imagine how hard it would be to make a choice. This poem was so heartbreaking and beautiful in its entirety. I feel for you. |
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Re: Torn between two
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 04:04:14 PM AEST
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| There is no need to lose faith because love did not work out this time. Love will sprout a new |
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Re: Torn between two
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 03:40:46 AM AEST
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| I relate to this so well, and understand all your conflicting emotions ... but believe that if you had found your one true love, you should have taken the leap and finally lived in bliss rather than dying alone. ... great poem ... Jan |
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Re: Torn between two
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 06:20:09 AM AEST
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I had to come back to read this again. Everything I said in my first comment still stands.
I hope you come back soon.
*hugs*
Phil xxx |
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