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My inspiration, where are you?

Contributed by bhav on Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 01:02:59 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered



It has been days since I have written a word,
it seems my hands refuse to write a single word.
They say how can you write when your inspiration is miles away?
I say why not? It’s the only way.

There hasn’t been a word from your side since months,
I guess the only thing I can do is wait and count the months.
Agreed we did not part on a happy note,
but at times Grandfather Time can play the role of a dictator and
can change all our notes.

If I tell you I miss you then it won’t sound that genuine,
but these are the words,
which I have used time and again,
and my words are genuine.
I wish you could understand how I feel?
My situation is like a fish without water,
I know I can’t survive without hearing from you
my inspiration my water.

Each night in my dreams you give a visit,
even before I say “Hello�
You say its time to go.
How long will this go on?

I am slowly and steady reaching my wits end,
There I see,
there lies a beautiful grave of the poet bhavik
who met with an uninspiration end.




Copyright © bhav ... [ 2004-05-08 01:02:59]
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Re: My inspiration, where are you? (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 06:47:26 AM AEST
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Poetry cannot be forced my friend you have writers block it comes to all of as times, Wait patiently and be ready when it returns. Good luck


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Re: My inspiration, where are you? (User Rating: 1 )
by bhav on Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 01:23:52 PM AEST
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Benard...
Thanks for reading and liking my poem...Bhav


Re: My inspiration, where are you? (User Rating: 1 )
by XxLifeOfATeenxX on Monday, 15th February 2010 @ 02:00:08 PM AEST
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its really good :)




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