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Distant
Contributed by
frozensuicide
on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 11:08:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I smile so you cannot see the pain,
But can you see the blood run down the drain?
You're so distant; I can barely feel your heart beat.
I cant even hear the steps of your own feet.
What's wrong with me?
Am I the only one that can see?
That everyone is so distant
So distant from me.
I try to express my sadness,
And you just push it away.
I try to cry out the pain,
But you ignore me day by day.
Distant.
You're so distant, I can barely see you smile,
Distant, you're farther away than a mile,
I don't understand.
I thought you were my friend?
But how can you be?
When your so distant and away from me?
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2004-05-07 23:08:00]
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Re: Distant
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by SilentPwn on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 11:43:52 PM AEST
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Nice writing technicque. I know how you feel...
Good write. |
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Re: Distant
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by farmtowngirl on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 11:52:43 AM AEST
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| Wow when i read this poem my mind raced cuz i know exactly what your feeling. its happening to me right now and u expressed it so well! awesome job keep it up! |
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