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Through The Eyes Of A Woman (part 2)

Contributed by sexygirl on Sunday, 6th October 2002 @ 06:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

When I am with you the world stands still
I have no doubt that it is real
I looked into your soft warm eyes of green
With my hand in his hand it felt so right
He smiles as he hands me a single rose
I smiled back at him as I reached for the rose
My eyes filled with tears when I found a ring inside
He stood before me as he spoke the words "I Love You"
My life is empty without you
Your everything I ever hoped for
With this ring will you marry me
She wrapped her arms around him while she whispered yes "I'll marry you" in his ear
I Love you too...

Copyright © sexygirl ... [ 2002-10-06 06:30:00]
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Re: Through The Eyes Of A Woman (part 2) (User Rating: 1 )
by crucifixioncross on Friday, 25th October 2002 @ 09:22:51 AM AEST
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very nice follow up but i do have one offhand criticism you started it as first person and switched if you dont know what i mean you started as I and end with She maybe you meant it to be speakin of someone else besides you at the end but either way its was nice, i liked the first one better but this one is no doubt good so keep em up

truly yours,
crucifixioncross

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