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Days...
Contributed by
SilentPwn
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Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 07:44:25 PM in AEST
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Today's just one of those days.
I feel dead here, no one cares here.
This mark of hatred betrays.
I mix emotions now, So much emotion now.
My heart seems darkened in shadows.
So much blood shed, tear shed.
My heart's taken, Satan borrows.
Hey there, save me from here.
I must remain hybrid from the rest.
Lonely, no one knows me.
I'll partake in something less.
Give me credit, over the limit.
Copyright ©
SilentPwn
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2004-05-07 19:44:25]
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Re: Days...
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 08:06:42 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC...the best poetry site on the net...
This is a lovely poem... somehow I have so many of those days lately...
Jenni |
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Re: Days...
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by SilentPwn on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 08:22:24 PM AEST
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| Yes. ..Thank you. |
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Re: Days...
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by AnGeL_M on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 08:27:07 PM AEST
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Nicely Written !!!!!!!!!! I To Feel Like This Often Like No One Cares !!!!!! I Feel Lonely !!!!!!!!
I Even Feel like No one Loves Me Or Want's Me Around Them !!!!!!!!! Thanks For Sharing This Great Poem & Welcome To Ypdc !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
********LoVe**AnGeL*********
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Re: Days...
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by Randibee85 on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 09:38:26 PM AEST
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Very, very good.
Nice shifts and great terminology. :>
P.S.
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Re: Days...
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 11:23:55 AM AEST
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That horrible feeling of isolation, i know it well, thankfully those days for me are now few and far between, great poem.
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