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Moonlight
Contributed by
Val-Hundra
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Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 06:56:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I sit alone
The cold wind blowing
And biting
Like a demon.
The moon calls to me.
Its eerie glow
Illuminates the depths of my heart
The places the sun cannot reach.
Faraway songs
Drift to my ears
I want to join them.
There, in the stars
I could be at peace.
Copyright ©
Val-Hundra
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2004-05-07 18:56:42]
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Re: Moonlight
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by SilentPwn on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 07:05:21 PM AEST
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| Now. Eh.. that's a nice poem. I like; I like a lot. I can even fully understand what you are try to 'say'. =] |
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Re: Moonlight
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 07:06:54 PM AEST
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| Yes... me loves this one. and so do the squirrels of CZECHOSLOSERBIA ^_^ |
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Re: Moonlight
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by Archie on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 07:46:05 PM AEST
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| I think you meant glow on line 6 of your poem which is a very good read. |
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