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To A Place
Contributed by
IamChrisHuff
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Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 05:11:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I want to go to a place
Where the fields are always open.
Where the sky is always blue
And the air is always clear.
Where the grass is always green
And the trees are all alive.
Where the wind is always blowing.
And the dreams are all dreamt.
Never any pain, or any crying, any death,
Not a thought of evil or hatred.
I want to be in a place like that
But I'm gonna have to wait until I'm out of this one.
Copyright ©
IamChrisHuff
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2004-05-07 17:11:55]
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Re: To A Place
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by Archie on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 05:20:44 PM AEST
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I like this poem it is a good introduction to a song I wrote. I don't know if you are a christain or not but here is the intro to my song as an inspiration for the great poem you have written here.
"Can't you here your father calling
come on into everlasting life.
Theres a mansion waiting for you
at the end of all yor trials and strife"
Thanks for sharing your poem. |
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Re: To A Place
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by emystar on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 06:11:32 PM AEST
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Very nice write.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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