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Judgement Day
Contributed by
Cora-Windover
on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 03:22:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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I looked upon your eyes with hope
And foolishly I dared to dream
Although your face is still the same
Behind your eyes lie silent screams
I dared to love you, how I fell!
Crushed and bleeding, broken wings
And in your arms I found my home
You offered more than any king
Life was never smooth for me
I wisely didn't think to ask
But when I looked upon your eyes
I knew you saw behind the mask
Last night I opened up my soul
Your guard slipped and I saw what's real
You never loved, but led me on
You lived behind a mask, like me
Hide your heart and so kill mine!
Burn our bridge and wish me dead
A flash of truth behind your eyes
That timeless night you shared my bed.
Alas, your footsteps fade away
I know I'll never hear again
Tears scorch my cheeks and I realize
I’m ending with nothing…just as I began.
Copyright ©
Cora-Windover
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2004-05-07 15:22:06]
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Re: Judgement Day
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by Black13 on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 03:25:50 PM AEST
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This was incredible.
I think this is one of my tops for the day.
Perfectly written.
Just amazing work. |
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Re: Judgement Day
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by Princesaazul16 on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 03:36:29 PM AEST
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| Thats so deep, I loved it. I dont know what else to say, im taken away. |
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Re: Judgement Day
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by reprobate on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 04:16:55 PM AEST
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words fail to describe my feelings for the sad portrayed. excellent write.
thanks for sharing |
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