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Deafening Silence
Contributed by
Solmyr1404
on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 02:05:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Listen....
Do you hear that?
Silence....
You do?
Well good for you....
I don't hear it
Anymore....
I haven't heard it
For a while....
Not since her,
Since she broke my heart....
We were good friends,
Almost dating....
She thought we were,
But I had a girlfriend....
She said I lied to her,
Then left me alone....
Just quit talking to me,
And avoided me....
Now when I see her
I try to look happy and proud....
But if she looked into my eyes,
She'd see I'm crying inside....
Where'd the silence go, you ask?
Why don't I hear it....
I no longer hear it
Because it is drowned out....
Her memories haunt me,
I hear my screams instead of silence....
Only she can quiet them,
Only if I get her back....
Could this deafening silence
Be ended....
Copyright ©
Solmyr1404
... [
2004-05-07 14:05:10]
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Re: Deafening Silence
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 02:16:18 PM AEST
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| nice writing style. im sorry about the situation. maybe explaining it might help, or give her this poem. |
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Re: Deafening Silence
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by kailadragon on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 12:44:58 AM AEST
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| great write dude. I really like this one. it's amazing work, and very moving........like I told you, i'll help you in any way I can |
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Re: Deafening Silence
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by shorty_52 on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 08:01:05 PM AEST
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u poetry is beautifully sad. this one almost made me cry. but it was very well writen, i'm still here if u wanna talk about it.
~allyson~ |
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