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PROUD OF YOU
Contributed by
13hopes
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Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 01:07:45 PM in AEST
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Never did i fear, i wanted you to hear.
Your night that you run, was a night of fun.
For such a worthy reason, such a worthy cause.
For what you believe in, just because.
I have a first person understanding in the reason why.
No one has the reason to doubt you, no one can deny, what you have done, you have no reason to be shy.
Let me thank you for letting me be a part, of something for you that is new. i thank you for letting me in, on something for you that is only the start..
I will be there to support you, i will be there to see you through, in every way possible, with my heart for you that is true.
For what you have done tonight will turn some kids day from grey to blue.
I dont know how to say, in every way i am proud of you.
You said that it feels like nothing, trust my words, its not in vain. Thanks to you, a smile on some kids face, that is living in pain.
I know that some smiles, never may you see. Know within in yourself, without you, they could not be.
Knowing that there are kids in this world that day to day face pain and suffering, what you have achieved is something that is worthy of every respect. Even though you may not see a wish come true for some, just know that if it wasnt for you, there would be one less smile....
Humbled by youur courage & achievement...
I DO MORE.......
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Re: PROUD OF YOU
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 01:24:48 PM AEST
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How wonderful of you to acknowledge such a hero. Most of the time unselfless acts get pushed to the side for telling of the negative side of life. I think is we spent more time acknowleding the good instead of the weak and bad that may the world would begin to see that you get more attention with positive actions rather than negative. Excellent piece from your heart.
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Re: PROUD OF YOU
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by emystar on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 07:36:53 AM AEST
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Very beautifull write.
luv,huggs,
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Re: PROUD OF YOU
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 01:01:07 AM AEST
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Lucky peron u write about. This write is heavenly beautifull and very humbling that it almost made me cry.
Very good stuff here.
luv, huggs, faith, hope, joy,
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