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A Shining Star
Contributed by
starlight_dancer
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Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 12:57:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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Darkness filling the whole land through,
Entwined in black, no sky now blue.
No life on land or in the sea,
Only sadness clothing me.
A storm awaited for so long
A zephyr wind becomes so strong.
The rain falls down right from above,
Opening my heart into arms of love.
As the storm doth dwindle and fade,
I remember all those prayers I prayed,
A new life with God shining down
The King of love which I now crown.
On eagles’ wings together we fly
Hand in hand through bright blue sky.
A rainbow shining down as gold,
More and more that love unfolds.
Each day so beautiful now passes by
Beneath my God now I lie.
The sun always shining down so bright
At long last I find true light.
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starlight_dancer
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2004-05-07 12:57:25]
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Re: A Shining Star
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 03:51:39 PM AEST
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| Beautifully written, and a very inspiring poem. Excellent work! |
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Re: A Shining Star
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 12:57:02 AM AEST
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Starlight Dancer this was so true and upbuilding. A light as you put it to guide us through the darkness of this dark ole world!
A light eternal as long as your back your never turn upon it.
I'm so happy you have found peace and tranquility in your Creator......you will bring him much joy also
Lovely poem
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Re: A Shining Star
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by Wachumiri on
Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 08:15:58 AM AEST
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This poem was awesome, although the meter was off a bit at times. It needs to be sanded a bit, I think, but still very good.
May you always keep an eye on the true Light.
Take care.
David |
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