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Except Me

Contributed by swiftsouljah on Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 09:42:36 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Deceived by a hallucination
That you’ll be here with me
Clinging to a delusion
That you actually care
I sit here in despair
And wonder why you can’t see
What you do to me
How come I can’t
Draw myself away
Move on
Forget you
And live my own
Brighter day
But without you
My life
Just seems so empty
Who’s gonna
Win this battle over me
Why can’t I tell you
That you tear me apart
Maybe it’s because
You hold my heart
And you do actually care
Causing me some pain
You couldn’t bear
So you’d walk away
Not knowing what
You’d do to Wayne
I wonder if it’s better
To love
But never see
Or to have
But not quite
My life will never
Work out right
You try to please
Everybody
In doing that
You’re bound to forget
Somebody
Too bad
They cared the most
That somebody was me
Why do you focus
On those you’ll never please
Giving yourself
Trying to satisfy their greed
Ignoring the fact
That you’re all
They should ever need
Till you realize this
I’ll always be cursed
By my hopeless wish
That you
Might feel
The same way I do
That you
Might love me too
You felt some love
And immediately shut down
Somehow you’re comfortable
When love ain’t around
You think everything’s fine
Cause it all seems cool
When will you realize
A broken heart
Doesn’t make a sound
Cause I’m dying inside
And nobody knows it
Except me

© Wayne Wende





Copyright © swiftsouljah ... [ 2004-05-07 09:42:36]
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Re: Except Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Kirby on Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 05:24:22 PM AEST
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Wayne, this poem was really sweet and kewl. I liked it alot and it made me want to sing the Lion King song when Mufassa has that bird in the cage and it starts to sing,"Nobody knows the trouble i've seen, nobody knows my sorrow!" LOL! sorry but it did and i still like it and i believe that if u read a poem you had better comment on it and I hate seeing a poem that has been read and has no comments at all.


Re: Except Me (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 01:56:53 PM AEST
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I agree this is a great poem, you say what it is your trying to convey in such a simple and pleasant manner. really enjoyed reading!!! A++++




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