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Lust?

Contributed by jt on Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 03:06:17 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



Raw emotions
Confusing.Racing. Unrelentless
What ever happened to the easy life?
How can someone feel so much
At one point in time
Yet so little about others
In the same instant?
Is it her?
Does she do this to me?
Like an energising, lust-driven drug
Confusing. Racing. Unrelentless
Does it show on the outside?
Does her effect radiate from me
Like a beacon on the black nights water?
How can this be?
So many thoughts
So many feelings
So many raw emotions
Confusing. Racing. Unrelentless
Drawing the very breath
Of my soul with her lips
Drawing the essence of me
With her touch
Yet feeding me with her presence
My desires
My heart aching
My body wanting
My needs changing in an instant
Confusing. Racing. Unrelentless.....




Copyright © jt ... [ 2004-05-07 03:06:17]
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Re: Lust? (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 03:27:04 AM AEST
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Aaaah yes, a very good work of art.
very creative.
luv, huggs,
emy


Re: Lust? (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 03:40:14 AM AEST
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You have written a poem about life. Confusing, racing, and very unrelentless. It can be the other way round of course. serenity, love, understanding.

bernard.


Re: Lust? (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 04:12:18 AM AEST
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You may not like my response, but I have 2 words for you: SELF CONTROL! All men struggle with what you are talking about including me and I know one thing from my past expirience, it always leads to trouble. I probaly have no right to say that to you yet that is my comment.




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