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Optimistic.
Contributed by
Thivanka
on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 01:45:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Optimistic.
On the rise of the new moon,
There is hope,
Hope always there to behold,
Yet hard to decipher, hard to sort.
As we stand upon the braches of cactus,
We stare; hoping divulgence is not far,
Reaching, but not upon a soft mattress,
But with needles of mar.
Reaching for the distant stars,
Insouciant to thunder, lightning, rain & storm,
Hoping one day we would go so far,
And reach eternal calm.
-Thivanka.
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Thivanka
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2004-05-07 01:45:53]
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Re: Optimistic.
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by bernard on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 02:41:43 AM AEST
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While reading this most excellent poem I felt a contentment come over me it was as if I was perfectly at one with myself.
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Re: Optimistic.
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by emystar on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 02:45:14 AM AEST
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Very good write.
luv, huggs, calm,
emy |
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Re: Optimistic.
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by Archie on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 04:27:26 AM AEST
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| Very good poem. Good originality. |
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