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Bleeding Underneath
Contributed by
essentially9
on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 10:24:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Bleeding Underneath
The blood drips to the floor
You watch it bleed
From your veins
To the tiles underneath
It stains in a puddle
The razor drops with a clatter
Your wrists so scarred
Your heart so scarred with pain
You invent the problems
In your head
Feeling with your heart
Feeling like never waking
Thinking there is no use for you
While you are living
What use is there when dead?
You invent the problems
In your head
You focus so much on the pain
You forget the rest of everything
Your life is for you to live
Every decision you make
Your life is not any others
Don't give into others
Your blood drips to the floor
You watch it bleed
Is it the last time
To see the stains underneath?
Or will you give into your pain?
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2004-05-06 22:24:56]
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Re: Bleeding Underneath
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by katyqueen35 on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 12:50:23 AM AEST
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| that is so sad.good job on the poem though. |
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Re: Bleeding Underneath
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by afterdark on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 08:53:47 PM AEST
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| Another write I missed before.This of course is no suprise that it is as great as much of what you do write. |
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