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CAN i?
Contributed by
emystar
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Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 09:39:44 PM in AEST
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Design by: ~Linda's Signatures~
Out in big bad, cruel world
Struggling to survive lifes curls.
Not much strength all alone
Nuthing but an empty home.
Can I rest in your arms?
Can I magnatise your charms?
Oh please, please, please, can I
float far away in your arms?
Can we light magic sparks,
Light up our universe when dark?
Can we dance real slow,
Chase away blues in luv' flow?
Can we, chase away our pain
Rejuvenate luv, again-n-again.
Can we unlock luv's mystery,
learn life, happy-n-free.
Copyright ©
emystar
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2004-05-06 21:39:44]
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Re: CAN i?
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 10:21:40 PM AEST
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I don't know who wouldn't be cheered by this. I cheered me up and I was already happy. I love that picture you chose to go with it. Perfect.
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 10:21:49 PM AEST
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I'm sure you did just that, my friend....with this dreamy write..
Hugs
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Re: CAN i?
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 12:15:42 PM AEST
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Fantastic write, had a certain spiritual quality to it.
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Re: CAN i?
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by 13Hopes on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 01:33:46 PM AEST
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My Friend..
Your words are truly wonderfull and bring feelings of the truth that only special people in your life can bring... Your picture compliments your writing...
Cheers
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Re: CAN i?
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 04:44:07 PM AEST
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very sweet emy girl, i promise to catch up on your other poems soon, but have been sick, thank you for your comments on mine:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: CAN i?
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by sweetangeluk on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 04:49:37 PM AEST
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Emmy a beautiful poem really touched my heart. Beautiful picture to compliment your superb words
Great write
Take care
Love sweetangelukxxxx |
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Re: CAN i?
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by AnGeL_M on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 08:02:59 PM AEST
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Wonderful Write Emy !!!!!! I Was Sorta Feeling Down Till I Read This Beautiful Poem & It Has Cheered Me UP !!!!!!!!!! :-)
Thanks Emy .....Much Love And Hugs !!!!!!!!!!!!! God Bless
*******LoVe**AnGeL********
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Re: CAN i?
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by JennyFruFru on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 10:29:35 PM AEST
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| wow if things were only that easy... the world would probably be a better place.......... well done girl :) :) :) |
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Re: CAN i?
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by Cynthia on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 09:27:23 PM AEST
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| I thought this poem was very nicely written. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: CAN i?
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by secretwind on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 08:18:47 AM AEST
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| So sweet....love the picture. |
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Re: CAN i?
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by holderofthestone on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 01:21:36 AM AEST
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great poem good emotion here. love the picture aswell Can I rest in your arms?
Can I magnatise your charms? great lines |
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Re: CAN i?
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by Rhei76 on
Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 04:24:13 PM AEST
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| Sweet, wishful thinking. Smile, smile |
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Re: CAN i?
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by Archie on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 05:55:21 AM AEST
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| This is a very good poem. I like the picture you chose for it too. |
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