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Garden of Deadened Dreams
Contributed by
Soulless
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Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 09:05:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
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What have I to chase anymore?
Once my pastures of dreams are gone
After I’m left picking petals blackened
What can I plant from all withdrawn
My garden of flowers all have blossomed
No survival found
Among my field blooms are deadened
Alone and not a sound
Could it be I’m the only one left
After all my flowers cease to be
I have nothing left to grow
After all this what is there to become of me
My garden of flowers all have blossomed
No survival found
Among my field blooms are deadened
Gone
My garden of dreams all are shedding
Revealing no truths
Along this field my flower is dying
My last petal that holds youth
What have I left to catch
With nothing but a deserted pasture
Lost with a lonely rapture
What dreams have I to capture
My garden of flowers all have blossomed
No survival found
Among my field blooms are deadened
Gone
My garden of dreams all are shedding
Revealing no truths
Along this field my flower is dying
My last petal that holds youth
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Soulless
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2004-05-06 21:05:06]
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Re: Garden of Deadened Dreams
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by blueheart on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 09:23:59 PM AEST
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Soulless, this is wonderful!!!
All the words you chose were perfect and blended together.
The last line was awesome to say the least. You described empathy and sadness so well.
Good job, I really loved this one!! |
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Re: Garden of Deadened Dreams
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 11:05:50 PM AEST
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| This is full of emotion, Soulless, it is very well writen. I enjoyed reading this one very much. |
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Re: Garden of Deadened Dreams
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by bleeding_chains on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 12:57:19 PM AEST
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| this is a sad but excellent poem. it rocks. |
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Re: Garden of Deadened Dreams
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 01:25:47 PM AEST
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so sad, so beautifully written, so moving, acceptance with a tear, truely poetry at its finest:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Garden of Deadened Dreams
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 07:12:43 PM AEST
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awesome poem... sorry I haven't commented lately just haven't been around. I love this poem so eloquently written keep it up!
Bobo (Joel) |
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