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Understanding (My Feelings Part 3)

Contributed by lonely_kakashi on Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 05:21:22 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

so your single now,
i wonder how i knew this would be,
question is,
where does this leave me?
you say do not want to be round me,
but i can not sit here and do nothing,
just the sound of your name,
brings chills straight to my brain,
the thought of you just sends me insane,
i let off steam to release my pain,
to make happy my other sides,
the one's i can not abide,
but this is just me locked inside,
you talk about swapping minds,
sounds good when can it be done,
so i can show you everything in my mind,
so you can feel what i do,
so you know what you do to me,
when i see,
when i am around you,
to know the effect of 'you'.

maybe then you can see,
what you do to me,
how you effect my whole life,
how odd things just send me round the bend,
how silly things make me want to die,
completely unrelated things,
from the whole of you.

How can i make you see,
how can i say,
the things stuck in my head,
get them out and express,
so that you can understand it all,
understand why i act the way i do,
so you can fully understand,
the wholeness of me.

Copyright © lonely_kakashi ... [ 2004-05-06 17:21:22]
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Re: Understanding (My Feelings Part 3) (User Rating: 1 )
by New_York_Chick on Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 07:29:57 PM AEST
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I haven't read the first two parts, but this one was great

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