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The Cool Winds Blow
Contributed by
Juliet
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Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 04:57:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The all-enveloping wind is soothing my mind,
as its tongue sweeps down my mouth to slash my heart,
to make me cry for my childish dreams
which have been permitted to reveal themselves true.
I had planned for the misty confusion to lift from my eyes,
only to find a cloud of confusion seeping deeper into my head.
the mocking words ring through my ears,
playing a song that I cannot bear to listen to,
for I cannot accept what I have not foreseen.
And all the wonderful posibilities have darkened my thoughts.
Copyright ©
Juliet
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2004-05-06 16:57:12]
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Re: The Cool Winds Blow
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by Remy on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 06:29:56 PM AEST
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i love the dark imagery in this, you describe it well... great write! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: The Cool Winds Blow
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by reprobate on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 12:11:44 AM AEST
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sadly twisted.
thanks for sharing |
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