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The Last Letter
Contributed by
gothicangel
on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 04:52:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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This is the last letter I will ever write,
It will block all of your sight.
Because it is my last smell of May,
it is my independence day.
The rain is falling down on me,
washing the makeup so I can see,
the Spring who is making the forest green,
Yeah, It is time for me to become clean.
The sun protects me and keeps me warm,
the rain only does me harm.
The only sun that could ever shine,
were you, when you were mine.
Nobody can ever love you like I do,
my life has no meaning without you.
I guess you never will hear from me again,
so this is the last words i write with my pen.
You had the chance,
you lost the last dance.
Copyright ©
gothicangel
... [
2004-05-06 16:52:03]
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Re: The Last Letter
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by BrghtNSnshny on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 05:05:37 PM AEST
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| wow that was good..so much emtion like you could feel it...good write keep it up |
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Re: The Last Letter
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by williamdye on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 06:24:27 PM AEST
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| I Love it, thank you for the poem. |
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Re: The Last Letter
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by Remy on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 06:28:30 PM AEST
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sad to be missing out on the dance, can i dance with you instead? lol... this is good writing, i like it... ;0)
~Remy~ |
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