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Scars
Contributed by
SheDevil13317
on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 04:20:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Take hold of the knife,
Hold it tight,
Watch the night,
Pass you by,
Every lie,
I've come to face,
Adds the lace,
For I to hate.
Look at the colour,
Quiver and shudder,
I scream even louder,
As the pain keeps wielding,
As the truth is releaving.
You left me behind,
For me to find,
Nothing beyond,
What I've come to already see,
Left my heart scared,
You left it all broken,
You left it untied,
and unable to fix.... - SheDevil13317
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2004-05-06 16:20:02]
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Re: Scars
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by Remy on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 06:25:36 PM AEST
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hum, i like the imagery you give on the heart organ... though dark writing, i find this captivating... good write! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: Scars
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by SheDevil13317 on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 02:51:43 PM AEST
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| ^^' Thanx, I've been tring to get back into poetry lately, and this poem was one of the first, again thnx. |
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Re: Scars
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by LiLTor878 on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 11:26:23 AM AEST
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| Absolutly incredible. I love it. |
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