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Blood turns Black
Contributed by
alecfernadez
on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 03:43:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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Rembering this, Rembering that
A small wounded animal
Caught in a trap
Suddenly turned cannibal
Devour his own the survive
It doesnt matter how hard it tries
To hide all the feelings
To tell all the lies
It will destroy all beings
Unwitting deception is always sublime
Watch it wither and bleed on the floor
Its last dying breaths
A mind ***** just like bfore
This isn't a test
Self-inflicted pain to trap the weak
In this vortex of evil
His flavour of the week
***
No matter what everyone's gonna pay
I'll kill them
Just like in my dreams yesterday
Is this a deception?
Is it a lie?
Is he not serious?
Seeking attention?
NO
Copyright ©
alecfernadez
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2004-05-06 15:43:36]
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Re: Blood turns Black
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by arden on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 03:54:46 PM AEST
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whoa, powerful.
another awesome write.
i really liked this one.
well done keep it up.
Arden |
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Re: Blood turns Black
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by Cynthia on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 04:18:42 PM AEST
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| WHOA!!!!!!! Alec, this was very dark and disturbing. Excellent job. Keep up the good work. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: Blood turns Black
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by Remy on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 06:21:03 PM AEST
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dark and melodic, heavy if anything... glad you stick it in the RED book, oi. good stuff! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: Blood turns Black
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by Luka on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 07:17:39 PM AEST
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| if this is the type of poetry you post in your little red book, then through that damn thing away, this poem was garbage, everyone writes a bad poem once in a while |
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