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~''~ Fallen Angel ~''~
Contributed by
Cynthia
on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 03:43:14 PM in AEST
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She used to be loved,
she did what she was told,
she never said anything
bad about anyone.
~''~
She was well liked
by everybody that knew her.
~''~
One day,
she went off on her own
and started hanging
with the wrong crowd.
~''~
She made the wrong choices,
she started drinking ,
she got into smoking
and after a while,
she got into drugs.
~''~
She threw what
she once had
all away,
she made the mistake
of overdosing and
she passed away.
~''~
Her life would have
been saved,
if she didn't let
her guard down
to be influenced....
by the wrong crowd.
~''~
Copyright Cynthia Jones
Jan.28/2004
Copyright ©
Cynthia
... [
2004-05-06 15:43:14]
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Re: ~''~ Fallen Angel ~''~
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 03:54:44 PM AEST
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Lovely, but so sad. I've seen many a young 'un fall like this.... You've written this really well..
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Re: ~''~ Fallen Angel ~''~
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by arden on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 03:58:03 PM AEST
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you wrote this so well. so full of sadness and truth.
well done my friend.
Arden |
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Re: ~''~ Fallen Angel ~''~
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by alecfernadez on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 04:00:45 PM AEST
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| this is so relevant to the youth today, I fell into traps, and ended up smokin so much pot I dont remember the past 3 years, but i managed to pull through and quit (i was addicted). So i can relate to this, but for me it wasnt so much falling into the wrong crowd (how i started) but inabality to cope with my abuse ridden past. anyway great write, deserves a 11 out of 5 |
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Re: ~''~ Fallen Angel ~''~
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 04:09:54 PM AEST
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A sad commentary about being lead by the wrong influences. Not only young but older people do this too. Hopefully the majority wake up and realize before it is too late they are being led to slaughter.
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Re: ~''~ Fallen Angel ~''~
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by Remy on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 06:18:55 PM AEST
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hum, sad story of too many... nice hint of life philosophy in here, i like this one... ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: ~''~ Fallen Angel ~''~
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 06:21:14 PM AEST
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| I think we have all known somone like this n our life. This is great poem everyone can relate too. |
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Re: ~''~ Fallen Angel ~''~
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by VampireXLust on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 07:14:14 PM AEST
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| Makes me think of some of my friends... quite a reality check.... greta job in capturing the truth of falling in the wrong crowd... |
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Re: ~''~ Fallen Angel ~''~
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by blueheart on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 09:53:01 PM AEST
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| Yes, I believe we all have people like this in our lives. If only they were steered back onto the 'white' path. Great poem with a wonderful message. |
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Re: ~''~ Fallen Angel ~''~
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by venkat on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 12:14:42 AM AEST
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| I agree with the conclusion..soo true..touches my heart...venkat |
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