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Cenotaph
Contributed by
alecfernadez
on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 03:33:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Did you ever see that one person,
Gliding by at the speed of light,
Another thoughtless expression,
Of a less bewildered sight
If humanity is another question,
Then death is Just an answer,
Whats the point all this hesitation,
Why cant death come faster
Its an ironic painful lie we live,
Hate is just a sad way of life,
Uncapable to forgive,
Were just a joke on the edge of knife
Words cant express my doom,
And these scars will not heal,
But I dont care/I'm going soon,
And then maybe I can feel
This belated extinction is gonna come,
And when I'm dead I'll be on cloud nine,
Even though it would hurt for some,
I wont care, cos everythings gonna be fine
I'm just waiting for that inevitable finale,
I'm just waiting for my contentment,
Just waiting to finally be happy,
If life is hell, then death is a compliment
So here I am with a berreta in my hand,
I clasp at the handle, and depress the trigger,
Life is an antonym that I cant understand,
Death is better and I dont want to be any sicker
This is my farewell as I depart,
Bullet passing through my cranium,
Seziures deep inside my heart,
This is the end. Nothing else/ No continuum.
Copyright ©
alecfernadez
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2004-05-06 15:33:23]
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Re: Cenotaph
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by discantbelife on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 03:37:45 PM AEST
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i have read alot of peoms today but this one, i got to say was the best. i loved it, the way you expressed your feeling through this poem..."If humanity is another question,
Then death is Just an answer,
Whats the point all this hesitation,
Why cant death come faster"
I loved this part the most keep up wit the excellent work look foward to more....
Kisses, Yanique |
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Re: Cenotaph
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by arden on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 03:51:43 PM AEST
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im speechless....
just wow. this was so packed full of deep dark emotion. so perfectly written. this was just a truly awesome,amazing poem.
by far the best iv read all day.
well done.
Arden |
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Re: Cenotaph
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by Remy on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 06:16:44 PM AEST
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huh, parts of this i love and others i don't... i've mixed feelings on it - but damn that's some good imagery! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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