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Sickening Tears
Contributed by
afraid_of_fear
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Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 02:48:06 PM in AEST
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I'm crying these tears for you, for everything you mean to me
I miss you so much, i want you to go back to being my friend
I wish you had trusted me, confided in me as you had before
I loved you as i always did..
Your words stung my eyes, broke my heart
And everything you had promised me just fell apart
I want you to remember how we were, how i still am
Please go back to loving me as I believed you did
Maybe all you told me was a fairytale
Perhaps the secrets you told me were known to all
But I loved you, with all my heart, with all my soul
Please come back, and love me as i thought you once did
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Re: Sickening Tears
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 03:24:19 PM AEST
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Written with such emotions....
Jenni |
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Re: Sickening Tears
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by arden on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 03:30:44 PM AEST
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oh charlotte this is so sad girl :(
filled with deep emotion and great sadness.
written so perfectly.
well done my friend.
Arden |
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Re: Sickening Tears
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by alecfernadez on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 03:34:37 PM AEST
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| this is really sad and depressing. Great poem! |
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Re: Sickening Tears
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by Remy on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 06:07:59 PM AEST
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oi vey, tears like these are no fun... heartbreaking to read this...
~Remy~ |
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Re: Sickening Tears
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by FixateInSorrow on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 11:57:28 PM AEST
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| thats a good poem... |
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Re: Sickening Tears
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 06:12:08 PM AEST
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This is your heart on a page.......such honesty of emotions.
very well done
Roses
Larry |
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Re: Sickening Tears
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by blueheart on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 05:06:57 AM AEST
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| Aww...this was so sad, I could relate to the longing and heart break in this write. Feelings I can totally identify to. Brilliant. :) |
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