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Tragic Ending
Contributed by
alecfernadez
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Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 11:20:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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When Andrew and Helen met for the first time,
Something infected them, it was so sublime,
It injected them into a world filled with love,
Where they flew in the sky so far above
If life was so simple, then love was so hard,
Simple enough, 'I love you' engraved in a card,
But eventually things had to fall apart,
If life can die, then two lovers could part
But even with misfortune, love and hate,
They could not leave, and they could not wait,
In a world always slowly rotating,
And people even faster; always hating
It was decided that if they couldnt have each other
Then no other person in the world could,
So they clasped a knife in each of their hands,
And as the sun collapsed below the land,
They embraced, and gave themseleves to ashes
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alecfernadez
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2004-05-06 11:20:03]
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Re: Tragic Ending
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by apollo on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 11:34:27 AM AEST
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| wow. simply beautiful but tragic. it is so true in the world of love that sometimes we feel that if we can not have love, than no other can either. beautiful write. |
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Re: Tragic Ending
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by Remy on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 01:51:12 PM AEST
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the romantic period is over, yet the style flourishes evermore. do i like this? oh yes, but the cynicism eats me away for some reason. egh, don't mind me - good write. ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: Tragic Ending
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by Dying_Angel on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 01:49:37 PM AEST
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| It happens... beautiful.. |
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