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The end
Contributed by
little_genna
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Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 10:27:16 AM in AEST
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ApologyPoetry
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I
have a strange feeling inside.
Like when some one has died.
I cannot even begin to describe it.
I'm just not ready to commit.
When you smile at me, is it really at me?
And it's always cheesy.
You say you want to be closer.
Well I think we are close enough and in a lot deeper.
You're just not there when I need you,
Makes me become a cheater towards you.
I need to feel loved when I need it.
Not when you can only see me at weekends that's just the pits!
I'm sorry to say but I have strayed,
So I no longer want to have to stray,
When I can be free.
Just to see whom I want to see.
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little_genna
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2004-05-06 10:27:16]
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Re: The end
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by Black13 on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 10:28:34 AM AEST
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I understand the idea of this.
Nicely conveyed.
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Re: The end
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by bernard on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 10:54:48 AM AEST
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To commit oneself at an early age is not always a good thing. I hope that you will not become single or should I say stay single.
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Re: The end
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by Remy on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 02:08:43 PM AEST
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humi... well pointed questions in wondering usually happen from time to time, i like how you brought out all those thoughts. good stuff... ;0)
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