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Nirvana to Anomaly
Contributed by
Thivanka
on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 08:22:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Nirvana to anomaly.
A loner.
Engulfed by a world made of
Four walls,
Silenced by entity,
Beaten by the sticks of avarice, envied
By personal accumulations.
They perceive you as an untamed
Animal,
An imposer sent to eradicate their
Aggregates.
Demarcated from the world,
He sits alone staring into darkness,
A black hole that holds cryptic knowledge
Forbidden solely, to his senses.
There he is forced to consolidate with
Seclusion,
To wed the bride of death,
To hold her hand, as she guides him to the brink
Of his grave.
There she will beseech him to lay
Down,
As to place his head on the age-old
Sand,
Where he will suffocate and die,
And hold hands for eternity with
The bride of death.
Exultation.
He has found the peace he wished
To seek,
Enlightened in a spasm of time,
A rare light amongst the dark shadows,
A shot in the dark that shed
Success.
To be enlightened is to die,
So as to obliterate the visions that bring about
Lust;
Cutting the tongue in hope of restraining
Words that bring about
Dispute among all races;
Dousing sexual organs to form
A temperate entity in
Convenient numbers.
To be enlightened is to die;
Abbreviating all senses in hope of
Enigmatic bliss,
Praying alone in the furnace
Of death,
Facing the deep blue sky
Lying alone,
In his grave.
-Thivanka
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Thivanka
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2004-05-06 08:22:43]
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Re: Nirvana to Anomaly
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by williamdye on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 09:14:55 AM AEST
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| Awesome! I loved it. |
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Re: Nirvana to Anomaly
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by Black13 on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 09:26:12 AM AEST
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| I really liked the flow. It was well written. |
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Re: Nirvana to Anomaly
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by Baronhawk on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 12:53:39 PM AEST
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| A wreck indeed but an insightful and an interesthing wreck to wit. I would say that while not knowing your true to life conniptions this poetic depiction herein speaks of a complex mind. So no death is not the only answer I would say.. life is a bunch of problems and living life is solvign them...to paraphrase the Chinese saying. So I guess with wit such as this stick with it and you may find an answer as how shall you go on...ha ha haLOL me a hermit giving advice to someone to live...ha ha ha such irony...anyway...a very complex but interesthing poem...such intricaies my friend perhaps death is too soon an ending for such a skillful rendition...Bon Chance! |
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Re: Nirvana to Anomaly
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by Mihiri on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 10:49:32 AM AEST
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| very gamburu & dark. true, one will b enlightened only after he or she bids farewell 2 his life on earth. u believe in rebirth, but I don't, eitherway, death is the only way that anyone can every fully understand the truth about his or her life. very well written! gave me da shivers! hehe[lol]! |
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