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EXCUSE ME, UH, CAN I

Contributed by emystar on Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 04:25:49 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Mel Gibson

SultryRose's Signatures Your ocean blue eyes
peirce right into my soul.
Your voice I'd gladly
follow where ever you go.

Excuse me, uh, can I
get your autograph?
Excuse me, uh, can I
get lost at your house?

I'd sit silently 4-ever
lost in your peircing eyes.
You'll never need speak
are tell me secret lies.

Don't want money or fame
jus to get lost each dayI
in those heavenly eyes
Nuthing much else can I say.

Copyright © emystar ... [ 2004-05-06 04:25:49]
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Re: EXCUSE ME, UH, CAN I (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 04:39:19 AM AEST
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I did not expect music with my poem, very cool and the poem is too!

Re: EXCUSE ME, UH, CAN I (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 06:31:41 AM AEST
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hey!!

wow you write so good.
I liked this one.
it was really sweet.
I thought that the flow was really good and it didn't use much redundancy, it got straight to the point.i think.

hehe
katie

Re: EXCUSE ME, UH, CAN I (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 08:16:11 AM AEST
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Oh Emy! Now that I would like to wake up to every morning and go to sleep with every night (sigh))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

Hugs,
Rita

Re: EXCUSE ME, UH, CAN I (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 09:35:30 AM AEST
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"Excuse me, uh, can I
get your autograph?
Excuse me, uh, can I
get lost at your house?"

lol that's cute... good write Emy!

Re: EXCUSE ME, UH, CAN I (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 04:01:13 PM AEST
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Oh Grrlfriend... intoxiating!!!! He's dreamy huh? :>)
Jenni

Re: EXCUSE ME, UH, CAN I (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 08:32:42 PM AEST
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Awe Emy This Is An Awesome Write !!! I Love Mel Gibson !!!!! I'd Love To Meet Him In
Person Get His Autograph And Just Have Him Wrap His Arms Around Me One Time LoL !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*******LoVe**AnGeL*******
*****************************

Re: EXCUSE ME, UH, CAN I (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 05:06:55 PM AEST
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Emmy what a guy. Those eyes do penetrate the soul. He is my fav man and what a fantasy thinking of him lol

Fab poem loved it and the pic cor....

Love sweetangelukxxxxx

Re: EXCUSE ME, UH, CAN I (User Rating: 1 )
by JennyFruFru on Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 10:31:25 PM AEST
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sorry emy not really a mel fan... i mean sean connery tho... he is the HOTTEST old guy alive... and that accent oh man... ill just pretend this poem is about him instead.... lol... or maybe a younger idol like ummm... Ben Affleck... there ya go... now he's a hottie... hehe cute write :) :) :)

Re: EXCUSE ME, UH, CAN I (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 03:42:04 PM AEST
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HA HA YOU ARE SO FUNNY.

Re: EXCUSE ME, UH, CAN I (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 07:03:54 PM AEST
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oh emy this is so sweet!! lol@ can i get lost @your house hehe, hugs n' love nessa

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