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The lullabye
Contributed by
JennyFruFru
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Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 01:00:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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A lullabye is softly heard
far within the wind
A child crys so gently there
and yet it has not sinned
Its ashame that there is sadness
coming from a precious soul
A mother's gone
God's will was done
and yet this little child will not know...
Its mother's love was present
even though she may have passed
her lullabye that she had sung will forever last
within the springtime meadows and within the buzzing bees
the lullabye that she had sung will not be blown away within the breeze...
The moon will shine so brightly and heal the child's pain
and a little deer, that was so near, will sweep his tears away
Although the boy feels sorrow
he knows he must stay strong
to keep his mother's will intact
and sing her very song...
Copyright ©
JennyFruFru
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2004-05-06 01:00:48]
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Re: The lullabye
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by venkat on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 01:12:33 AM AEST
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| sadly touching....its a lovely poem. venkat |
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Re: The lullabye
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by emystar on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 01:36:55 AM AEST
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Incredably sweet even tho, mother is gone.
Sad but written with such luv, tenderness, faith, courage and luv.
very magic work of art jus in time for mom's day.
This write touches deep into the soul.
Very powerfull.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: The lullabye
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by Hurretje on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 01:53:27 AM AEST
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Haunting and touching!
Greetz,
Hur |
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Re: The lullabye
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by secretwind on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 02:25:17 AM AEST
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| Well done..... |
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Re: The lullabye
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by PoloRM on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 02:27:37 AM AEST
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Well it doesn't seem like it would've fit in Happy Poetry.
Beautifully sad.
PoloRM |
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Re: The lullabye
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by bernard on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 04:03:59 AM AEST
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Very sad but there is a sign of hope for the little boy in this delicate poem. Nice writing.
bernard. |
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Re: The lullabye
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by Archie on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 04:53:34 AM AEST
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| No this is not sad poerty it is life poetry and it is one of the best that I have read, you are improving. I really like this poem it gets better towards the end and your rhyming becomes more consitent as the verses move along. Nice job. |
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Re: The lullabye
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 08:27:26 AM AEST
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This one brought tears. How beautifully you wrote it, sweet pea. Your heart is so full.
Rita |
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Re: The lullabye
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 08:48:42 AM AEST
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| sad but beautiful write Jenny.... |
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Re: The lullabye
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by mountainhigh on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 10:28:38 AM AEST
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That is beautiful, and on quiet night.
Thank you. |
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Re: The lullabye
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by arden on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 10:53:44 AM AEST
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so very very sad.
i love how this was written. so filled with emotion and great sadness.
so perfect.
i loved this.
Arden |
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Re: The lullabye
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by krisseee on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 11:20:11 AM AEST
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| an easy read. nice |
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Re: The lullabye
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by loveisendless on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 10:03:43 PM AEST
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THIS WAS HEART WRENCHING BUT SO BEAUTIFUL! JENNY YOU DID AN EXCELLENT JOB ON THIS & THEN SOME!! A
LOVELY STYLE WITH A DEVOTED MEANING
THAT SPEAKS FOR ITSELF-GREAT JOB!!!
LOL-DAN!!!! |
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Re: The lullabye
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by Cynthia on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 08:38:16 PM AEST
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| Awww, this was beautiful. It really touched my heart. This poem reminded me of the song "Green Sleeves." Don't ask me why, it just popped into my head as I was reading this. Excellent write Jenny. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: The lullabye
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 12:53:53 PM AEST
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very sadly beautiful................... hugs n' love nessa
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