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Full Moon on My Shoulder
Contributed by
monica109
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Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 10:23:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I cant think of a better place to be
The sky is fallen now
I cant think of a different dream
I'll find away some how
What will I find on my back
Is something awaiting to react?
There you are awaiting for me
Like a summer bolder
There it is, the truth I see
The moon on my shoulder
I cant see you know
Though my eyes are misty
All you wantted was a piece of me
And the fan is fisky
Will you await my downfall
Or is that my call?
repeat middle stanza twice!
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Re: Full Moon on My Shoulder
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by twinkletoes on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 10:28:04 PM AEST
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Moon on my shoulder...a graet line used well here.
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Re: Full Moon on My Shoulder
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by MoonlitAngel on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 10:38:32 AM AEST
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"I cant think of a better place to be
The sky is fallen now
I cant think of a different dream
I'll find away some how"
Love that part!! Great job!
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