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The music of the world
Contributed by
Archie
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Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 09:49:46 PM in AEST
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(Intro.)
The music begins with a strong heartbeat
Add the pittering sounds of walking feet
then the call of the seagul and the thump of a branch
as it hits the ground with a very hard crash
Hear the hum of the plane as it flies over head
Hear the crash of the waves on the rocks in their beds
And at first it might seem like a thunderous noise
'til you listen with your heart then you'll see it with joy.
(Song)
The car goes by upon the street.
My neighbors children stomp their feet.
At first it seems I should get mad,
but it does not disturb me bad.
A radio gets turned too loud.
A laughing person cackles proud
and to me all of this brings joy
the music of the world deployed.
(Chorus)
If you want a perfect town,
go make it.
If you want freedom to ring,
set captives free.
If you want a little peace
start praying,
for the world is seen in right actions
I hear the cry of the fallen child
I hear the mother's comforts mild
and on the news murder again
another soul lost to the wind.
Solicitor's call on my phone
trying to their sell promote.
A cat meows as I walk by;
a little pat will satisfy.
(Chorus)
If you want a perfect town
go make it.
If you want freedom to ring
set captives free.
If you want a little peace
start praying
for the world is seen in right actions
(Repeat)
Copyright ©
Archie
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2004-05-05 21:49:46]
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Re: The music of the world
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 10:02:46 PM AEST
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This is really beautiful, Archie... I could almost hear it in my mind...
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Re: The music of the world
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 02:51:26 AM AEST
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I enjoyed the introduction and first verse - they were quite refreshing, in their presence and auditory elucidation of your surroundings. The chorus is nice, although I don't think it is as captivating as the verses.
Overall, very good though.
I enjoyed reading it. |
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Re: The music of the world
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 06:30:38 PM AEST
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I like your song. I have to agree that I think the chorus could use a little strength there but all in all it is enjoyable. You are so right here, change will only come from us if we so choose to act.
Rita |
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Re: The music of the world
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by emystar on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 07:56:38 PM AEST
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Very good!
I exspecially like the verse.
If want a perfect otwn go make it.
If you want freedom
set captive free.
If u want a little peace
start praying
for the world is seen in right actions.
This is a very powerfull write.
It rocks!
Jus couldn't get the truth out there better than this write. You see things very deeply and deep is what we need is this day-n-age.
Awesome!
luv, huggs, faith, hope, peace,
emy |
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Re: The music of the world
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by emystar on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 08:01:31 PM AEST
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I'm back.
I guess I should have read the comments first but since I didn't then I'm back.
I disagree, to me the chourus is the strongest part of the whole song.
To see the world as You've discribed any one can see but now the chorus is the lost message to the world.
that's my veiw on this awesome write.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: The music of the world
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by venkat on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 04:37:37 AM AEST
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| I like your song..this is very good. venkat |
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