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Mr. Bald Eagle
Contributed by
Cynthia
on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 08:15:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChildrensPoetry
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Mr. Bald Eagle
was soaring through
the skies one day,
he was very upset
and was in total disarray.
His wings were getting tired
and his feet were really sore,
he had a bad headache,
so he decided
to stop at a store.
He got himself
a glass of water
and upon a bench
he did sprawl,
tears filled his eyes
then he began to bawl.
He lost all his feathers
from the top of his head,
the top of it got burned
it was really red.
He got up off the bench
then tripped over a twig,
he was going to go
back into the store,
to get himself a wig.
Copyright Cynthia Jones
May.5/2004
Copyright ©
Cynthia
... [
2004-05-05 20:15:00]
(Date/Time posted on
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Re: Mr. Bald Eagle
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 08:21:14 PM AEST
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That is so cute, my grandsons will crack up when they read it! I could just visualize it while I was reading.
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Re: Mr. Bald Eagle
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 09:02:33 PM AEST
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Good job.
Poor Eagle.
luv, huggs,
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Re: Mr. Bald Eagle
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 09:04:38 PM AEST
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| HEY! No making fun of bald guys! HAHA! This was funny. |
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Re: Mr. Bald Eagle
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by BrghtNSnshny on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 10:21:21 PM AEST
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| haha..that was funny..poor mr. bald eagle, its great that someone can write funny poetry and make it light hearted after loads of emtional distressing poetry is read. |
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Re: Mr. Bald Eagle
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by arden on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 02:44:09 PM AEST
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lol very cute.
nice work girl.
i really like this.
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Re: Mr. Bald Eagle
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by venkat on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 12:21:41 AM AEST
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ha,ha,ha, poor eagle.. loved your writes..
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