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desiree
Contributed by
faithmairee
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Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 08:03:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
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she was just a child
at her momma'a side
combing that coal black hair
until it shined
she asked momma what
does it mean to love
momma said it means to sacrifice
poppa said you know
it's just too late to cry
he's dead and he
never should've died
it was a bullet in
his head his momma cried
it was bound to happen anyway
all she ever wanted
was to love him
all he ever did
was look her way
now she cries out in
the middle of the night
lord, his dying
must be some kind of mistake
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2004-05-05 20:03:05]
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Re: desiree
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 08:22:45 PM AEST
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What a truly sad definition of love. I suppose it does mean sacrifice for some. Well written poem, Faith.
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Re: desiree
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by Diatribe on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 09:04:22 PM AEST
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| what a great poem... very sad too |
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