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Revenge
Contributed by
pyrofungus
on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 06:48:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Frantically walking away
I must not face it!
I must not face it!
Take me away!
Please, just take me away!
I have to leave!
I cannot hurt anymore!
I destroyed them all!
I didn’t mean it!
I just…
I just got so angry!
They just blamed me!
Me!
Lil ole me!
I didn’t do it!
How could I do it?
They left me for dead!
I had to come back!
I regained my strength!
I shot you all but left the one
I drained their blood
I slurped it all up
My revenge was sweet
‘cause you watched it all
You were so sick at the sight you saw
So scared that you were next
I toyed with your mind
I made you cry
I made you beg
Caused you so much pain
What about my pain? Huh?
My family?
You took it all away!
Now I’m taking it from you!
Leaving you for dead
Watching you take your last breath
Consuming your last drop of blood…
Laughing at your death!
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pyrofungus
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2004-05-05 18:48:22]
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Re: Revenge
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by srugglingyoungster on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 09:36:52 PM AEST
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wooooow! very dark. i love it! great write and keep it up!
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Re: Revenge
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by BrghtNSnshny on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 10:26:42 PM AEST
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| good write, kinda creepy though..very sombering |
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Re: Revenge
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by VampireXLust on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 07:22:55 PM AEST
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| so morbid and warped... I LOVE IT!! |
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Re: Revenge
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by Dragontear27 on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 03:12:09 PM AEST
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| very good write have some hidden demons your trying to get out? If so your doing great ^_^ |
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