|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Distant Love
Contributed by
HOPE4ME2
on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 06:46:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
|
Love unreachable, trapped in time.
Buried long before its prime.
Silenced from the beginning.
Each apart, no one winning.
Leaving one feeling hollow,
So unpredictable, unable to follow.
Dreams that were meant to be,
What could have been,
Between you and me.
Love, no one won,
Yet we were given the gift,
Of three precious sons.
Being together, yet all alone.
Protection from a heart of stone.
Unshed tears locked away,
In search of healing, but not today.
Distant love, did not have to win.
As it buried our future,
Heavy sigh...
Oh, what could have been.
Copyright ©
HOPE4ME2
... [
2004-05-05 18:46:02]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Distant Love
(User Rating: 1 )
by New_York_Chick on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 07:37:40 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
oh it always hurts to think of what could've been
great poem |
|
|
Re: Distant Love
(User Rating: 1 )
by Diatribe on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 07:42:34 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| good write! love at distance sucks... and thinking about what could have been sucks even more... it's like beating yourself up... it's often a good idea not to dwell on the past, but who am I to say? I do it all the time... nice poem |
|
|
Re: Distant Love
(User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 08:26:17 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Good poem, I'm gonna start looking for your poetry more often. |
|
|
Re: Distant Love
(User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 09:39:16 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| nice writing style. the what if questions are the worst questions the mind can conceive. |
|
|
Re: Distant Love
(User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 11:46:39 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
NICE POEM,SAD SUBJECT! HIS LOSS ALTHOUGH YOU HAVE NOTHING TO GAIN!!
SOUNDS LIKE YOU'VE GOT A PRETTY GOOD HEART!!! LOVE SHOULDN'T BE TOO FAR AWAY FOR YA!!!!
DAN!!!!! |
|
|
Re: Distant Love
(User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on
Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 06:47:02 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
This one has some really good lines! Some of the best poems are the ones written after a heartbreak, and your poem is awesome. I guess the breaking of the heart consumes the whole body, and all that is in you mourns its loss. Then your whole being weeps, and all the words you write come from your deepest heart, where the most beautiful words can be found.
Well that was a bit long, I'll stop now.
Take care, love again.
David |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
