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Who are you in the mirror?
Contributed by
blossomingcherry5353
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Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 06:45:36 PM in AEST
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As I put on my make up to hide the scars of
yesterday's fight with him,
I can only imagine what others might say about the bruises,
I lay on my floor,
A broken me,
The one that can not fight anymore,
Battered and bruised,
Almost dieing,
Not feeling,
I wish to not feel,
Is my wish comming true?
No it's is not i can still feel the him hit me,
I look in the mirror,
And say " it's just another day",
As i look at a picture of before to my self in the mirror,
I wonder,
Where is the care free, pretty, sophistacated, strong me?,
Who is this help less weak, tired woman?,
Just me,
The one who forgot my self for him,
I forgot to be my self.
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Re: Who are you in the mirror?
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by Diatribe on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 07:45:00 PM AEST
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| never forget yourself for the sake of someone else... sounds like a bad relationship... one you need to turn away from... good luck |
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Re: Who are you in the mirror?
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 09:28:17 PM AEST
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Very powerful indeed....then again, life can be at times.
BLessings
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Re: Who are you in the mirror?
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by BrghtNSnshny on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 10:30:28 PM AEST
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| that happens in too many relationships, that is so sad no one should sacrafice themselves for another |
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Re: Who are you in the mirror?
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by alwys2nv on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 11:41:16 AM AEST
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never give your self up for some one else always stay true to your self...
never lose hope cause when you do ....your already dead.. believe me i been there to many times |
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