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But a Blemish
Contributed by
reilt
on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 05:58:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Burnt flesh,
Smouldering regret.
They don't make them like you anymore,
Few and far.
See the girl I was
Under your thumb.
You know you had your turn,
You know I never ruled you out,
Jus that
It was too close to the bone
To draw the line.
Threw my trust against
The winds that blew
Round your bend,
Watched me confuse my left from right
Or wrong...?
Whatever it was,
It was a stretch too far
For my reach.
Now that I am out of your's,
Wounded, grafted, sore
Skin to shield
Our sins.
I'll confess I wanted more
Than you had to give.
Now you I can forgive.
You are but a blemish,
Burnt flesh.
Copyright ©
reilt
... [
2004-05-05 17:58:25]
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Re: But a Blemish
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by lil_angel on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 06:00:26 PM AEST
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| This is a great poem!Wonderfully done! |
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Re: But a Blemish
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by waos on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 06:18:39 PM AEST
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| that was really good. seriously. lotsa times when I read something I get bored part way through or whatever, but not this one. thanks for posting it. it was awesome to read. keep it up |
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