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Don't Be Afraid
Contributed by
New_York_Chick
on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 05:48:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I'm open-minded
So why do you fear
I will reject your way of thinking
I need to have options and know opinions
To keep me from sinking
Into one pattern of thought
Isn't that what you sought
I've got a free spirit
I respect your rights,
I know you want to keep your own life
Just like you I need my space,
I'm not trying to be your wife
So why do you act like you're haunted
Aren't I the girl you wanted
I'm likeable
But not snobby or too friendly
with other guys in any way
I know the limits, the boundaries,
the difference between do and say
I'm someone you adore like never before
Isn't that what you wished for
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New_York_Chick
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2004-05-05 17:48:48]
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Re: Don't Be Afraid
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by lil_angel on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 06:07:16 PM AEST
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| You have a great talent! Wonderful job! |
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Re: Don't Be Afraid
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by waos on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 06:11:25 PM AEST
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| i really like the last line of each stanza. especially "isn't that what you wished for" one. good work. |
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Re: Don't Be Afraid
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by BrghtNSnshny on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 10:42:06 PM AEST
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| that was really good..i can't righly explain what it brings out more of a personal type of thing, very good job |
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Re: Don't Be Afraid
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by Archie on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 07:52:12 AM AEST
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| Nice poem, No matter what happens keep writing and sharing that will make the biggest differance espeacially for you. |
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