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Terrible action

Contributed by booboo on Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 02:20:21 PM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse

one day everything was great,the next day
everything was ****,can't live with what i am
about to do,so what?really,what does it matter

my head keeps turning and turning,as i'm dreaming of running and running through a forest,scared of what is to come,i know it,but i hate it,i was always against it,i feel like a hypricrit,i swear its not all my fault

why wont i wake up?cuz i'm not dreaming,its reality,everything is happening,i'm taken terrible action,terrible action,terrible action

i was passed a joint,i only tried it once,look where that got me,running away from al them guys who are about to be the **** outa me,stoned outa my mind,can't go home,can't go to the police,can't go to a friend

i can only run and run more,i will never be able to hide,i hope i find a place soon,i'm so scared,i need help,help someone please help me,i'm running outa breath

**** as i fall to the ground i think i sprained m ancle,gotta get up gotta keep running,oh my god they caught me,theres too many of them i can't take them,i'm so much smaller

i think i'm dreaming again,i can hear sirens i can hear people talking,whats going on here?i'm not dreaming,i'm not dreaming,all i can see when i look down is blood,blood all over me,those guys gave it to me real bad,i'm at the hospital,4 broken ribs,a bloody nose and 2 nice black eyes,i didn't i realize what i was getting myself into??

why wont i wake up?cuz i'm not dreaming,its reality,everything is happening,i'm taken terrible action,terrible action,terrible action

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Re: Terrible action (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 06:49:31 AM AEST
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all this happend after taking one hit off a joint, unlucky... anyways, wierd write, confused me

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