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SUICIDE. But Not Just Any, my... SIUCIDE!!!
Contributed by
deathdrop
on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 11:53:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I’m cold, where life,
Has drained out of me.
I’ve lifelessly dissolved,
In insanity.
Where’s the point,
In living at all?
Numbness controls me.
Into depressions crawl.
Suicidal thoughts, flow,
In and out of me.
But this time it’s for real!
As I only have rusted keys.
I’m worthless!
If I’m not, why’s the pain here?
Why can’t it just go?
I’m sick of being full of tears.
I’m sick of facing a life,
That pulls me into madness.
And when I try to escape.
I find I’m full of anger and darkness.
I sick of people starting,
I’m sick of living in pain.
I can fake I’m happy if you like!
But I still can’t escape these chains.
At least this way I’ll be happy.
Away from a world like this!
Family, if you read this I’m sorry.
But this worlds so full of *****!!!
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deathdrop
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2004-05-05 11:53:30]
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Re: SUICIDE. But Not Just Any, my... SIUCIDE!!!
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by skelington on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 12:33:09 PM AEST
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Dont do something stupid. I kno where you are, I have been there myself. it gets better. good write tho i would like to see more of your stuff in the years to come
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Re: SUICIDE. But Not Just Any, my... SIUCIDE!!!
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 01:13:03 PM AEST
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| just, hold on ok? because you are worth alot more than that. lots more. i understand how you are feeling. i have been here myself. and i know my saying that doesnt help. but please, lets talk first ok. pm me, or email me or anything. just talk. it helps. im here if you need me. phil xxx |
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Re: SUICIDE. But Not Just Any, my... SIUCIDE!!!
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by LiquidChaos on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 01:38:16 PM AEST
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please don't do this. after all we've talked about. just looking at the comments on your poetry you should see that you have people who genuinely CARE about you. don't throw it all away. don't make the mistake i almost made. i tried to kill myself and hurt my family more than i will ever understand. please hold on. i'm here if you need to talk, and i know sometimes when people say that its the last thing you want. but please don't end things yet. god put you here for a REASON. don't throw it all away.
addie |
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Re: SUICIDE. But Not Just Any, my... SIUCIDE!!!
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by Tonilovesadam on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 01:47:39 PM AEST
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| Man i know how you feel. I have been there done that and it wasn't pretty. what ever the reason you feel like this just hang on and it will get better. your idea on this matter is a permant soultion to a temperory problem.Just trust me it isn't easy on any one with the this world F***ed up like it is but it all turns out in the best way. everything happens for a reason so just wait it out. you might find exactly what you have needed to find in this situation. Exellent poem thou. I loved the feeling of pain and helplessness in the words of the poem. |
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Re: SUICIDE. But Not Just Any, my... SIUCIDE!!!
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 01:49:03 PM AEST
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Sometimes in our deepest depression we feel so alone. We feel as if no one cares about us and giving up is just an easy way out for us. We think the pain will subside after our death, but it only just begins. Friends can be such a comfort to you, as friends here who read and like your work should be given an opportunity to reach out to you in your darkest hour. Reach out...give us a chance...as well as yourself a chance...to LIVE! You're worth it my friend!!!
Angel always...godspeed...Joni |
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