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Mesmerized
Contributed by
shanarah
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Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 10:05:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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Mesmerized
On a deserted path she stood,
in the crisp air
Spending time with her emotions,
with a heightened view
Influenced by the desire of beauty,
devoting her time to spring
Enchanted by the brittle mist of air,
making it into a portrait
Imagining the evening to die soon,
other images still alive
Sun and moon break over her head,
gazing with delight
She bent down on her knees to pray,
applauding nature of the truth
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shanarah
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2004-05-05 10:05:25]
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Re: Mesmerized
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by skelington on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 10:26:16 AM AEST
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| very inspirational!! I am like that, I like to sit by myself and it feels like it is just me and my emotions like u said. very good. keep up the good work!!!!!! |
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Re: Mesmerized
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 11:29:34 AM AEST
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This is lovely. I love to sit by my rock pond and listen to the water and watch the trees sway with the breeze. It is like listening to the wind talk to the trees. You have captured that feeling in this poem.
Rita |
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Re: Mesmerized
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 11:18:00 PM AEST
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Opulent beauty permeates every line of this poem. Breathtaking scenes, laden with spiritual overtones, and written with that certain flair you always imbue your works with. Well, you've got a number one fan now!
Truly,
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