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(No Title)
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skelington
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Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 09:19:58 AM in AEST
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I'm dying inside without you, losing you could kill. Your thoughts of suicide kill me, they make me feel less of a person because I make you that way.
I'm taking the enemy out and throwing it away, hopefully out of your life, but we can't all be that lucky.
There are two things I want right now, they are:
you and me, the way it used to be
and less to no thought on no tomorrow.
I honestly love you enough to say, I would rather you hate me then to throw it all away.
I can't hide from my life of sorrow while we are apart. You mean everything to me, and I just want you to kno that without you, I feel I am nothing.
You got me off drugs, and helped me straighten out my life. For that I am in eternal debt to you. You helped me relize that I could do something with my life, so I am hoping that I can do the same for you.
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by Tinkkerbelle on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 08:21:19 PM AEST
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| I am amazed... this poem fits so well to my friend Dominic... if I didn't know, I would swear it was about him. Excellent job capturing the thoughts and feelings. |
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by reprobate on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 09:21:28 PM AEST
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how about 'a plea for the future'. there is love within this piece that is palpable. good job.
thanks for sharing |
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